I'm posting a draft of some dialogue I've been working on here for people to comment on. Feel free to point out any errors you might see, grammatical or otherwise. When I'm completely satisfied with what I've written, I'll post these to the dialogue board. Dragonstar - Savant Located below the tall ...

Has anyone been working on Dragonstar dialogue? I can contribute more topics that are needed, consulting our dialogue guidelines and dialogue board.

I would like to claim this. Dumb question, probably, but where can I download the latest Tamriel_Data?

Just as a reminder, anyone is free to contribute dialogue here. In fact, please do. The Dragonstar Section needs a lot of writing to cover its characters and locations, and I can easily see this becoming a bottleneck for us.

Dialogue for Taurus Hall Greetings – High Disposition Well met, citizen. Welcome to Taurus Hall Legion Fort. You’ll be safe here from the unrest in Dragonstar. Now how might I assist you? Welcome to Taurus Hall, citizen. Do you need help finding your way around the fort? Or are you looking for some...

Yeah, the "[...]" rumor is meant to be a placeholder for a future quest hook. I have something in mind for it, though, so it will get fixed.

I used Largnok gro-Dugum and Mucouk gro-Lugo for a KW Fighters Guild quest, though perhaps they could be switched our for someone else.

Once you do, Texafornian, I'll make sure to play through your file finally. My apologies for not playtesting it sooner.

Dragonstar West Diagna He was a great hero and power spirit of the ancient Redguards. Across most of Hammerfell his cult has faded into obscurity, but he’s still widely worshiped in the Dragontail Mountains. You can find a temple dedicated to him here in Dragonstar. Latest rumors Cultists at the Te...

Along with Dragonstar, there are a number of small settlements in this section that will require some modest dialogue. They include: 1. The collection of Reachmen villages on the mesa east of Dragonstar. 2. The small Reachmen village in the canyon leading north from Dragonstar. 3. The small camp of ...

Here is a (very) rough outline for what the Thieves Guild's quests in Dragonstar could look like. Rough Outline for Thieves Guild Quests: The main threats facing the Thieves Guild in Dragonstar are Jarl Jona's crackdown on dissent and a rival gang led by the thief Dalach. The guild gathers at the Sh...

Shouldn't Jona's title be Jarl instead of Jarla? Jarla isn't actually a female equivalent of the title Jarl (there is none as far as I could find) and TESV used the same title regardless of gender.

Excellent list, roerich. I just want to point out that Eranthos is supposed to be female. Based on her name, I'd say she's probably either a Bosmer or Altmer.

Looks like a good quest plan to me. How would the player know he or she should consider taking the letter to Jarl Jona or her adviser? Perhaps they could send the player to investigate the DSE NPC to start off and then the player can choose which side to take?

Feel free to use this thread to contribute characters and dialogue for Dragonstar. To get us started, I'll post some dialogue I've been slowly working on: Redguard Greetings Player is a Redguard Welcome to Dragonstar, my Redguard brother. Tava watch over us. What brings you to our northern Tomba? We...

By all means, go ahead! I'm excited to see how these turn out.

Cool. I'll try to check these out soon.

I'm not sure we should implement rank advancement for the guilds until we know how to balance that for the rest of the province.

Finished.

Again, this is impressive work, Texafornian. You've done a great job implementing my plans and improving upon them. I do have a few comments on parts of your draft, but you're definitely going in the right direction with this. [35>=>X>=10] What’s that? Moon Sugar? My good sir, I’ll have you know I a...

[Credit to roerich for the original quest idea] Ghoul hunt Asking about latest rumors in Haimtír will get the following response: Not long ago, a group of weird people came through here. An utterly unpleasant lot, clad in rags and stinking like corpses. After we found them scavenging through the rui...

Greet job on this, Luxray. I only have a couple changes I'd suggest making. -- Make sure Haimtír consistently has the accent above its second "i" since that's how the cell is named in Sky_Main. -- Jhorcian's dialogue might need to be tweaked a little to fit with how I've written him. Here's how he t...

Hey, this looks like good stuff! I'm a bit preoccupied with classwork at the moment, but I should be able to give this a more thorough examination in a week or so. Until then, feel free to make any improvements you want. Or take a break if you want to come back to this with fresh eyes later. Thank y...

Not to my knowledge. I'll take care of it when I start working on the file again.

I was hoping this would be picked up soon. Granted.

I believe we've spoken before about thinning out the Haafinheim forest. There should be much fewer trees in the cells included with this claim.

From the last time I checked Markarth in the CS (I'm typing this from a school computer and can't take a look at it right now), it seemed that only one cell (the outdoor market one) had a possibly problematic ref count, while the others were below Karthwasten's average ref count. Is that correct? Pe...

Your plans all sound reasonable to me. I really look forward to seeing your work on this. I think you can go ahead and add the vault cell, as long as it matches the rest of the manor. Someone can look it over as part of reviewing the claim.

Someone could probably cut it out of an old version of Karthwasten and then patch it to use Tamriel_Data.

Nice. The (mostly) final version of Dragonstar looks superb. I love the little border outpost blocking the way into Hammerfell. Definitely more practical than a full-sized fort. There will probably need to be a little optimization here and there. In particular, we need to be careful about container ...

Claiming.