White Reef Isles - Voiceless Harmony [LilianaUnfolded][Reviewed]

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White Reef Isles - Voiceless Harmony [LilianaUnfolded][Reviewed]

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Voiceless Harmony is a dreugh hive in a deep Abecean trench between Stirk Isle and the mainland. This location contains a dreugh queen, and should reflect that importance with its size.

Please use Paruddma's Maw in TR as a model for this dungeon.
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while paruddmas would be good to look at, I think the difficulty of navigation should be toned down compared to P's
ie the minimap should be at least somewhat useful, and the verticality could be spread out more rather than everything overlapping

this way p's maw has a unique challenge, and it allows each dreugh citadel to come up with its own challenges and features

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That seems reasonable to me
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Claiming!

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You got it - have fun
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WIP of cell 1's shell

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Why didnt it send lol
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First draft of all 3 cell's shells, but in one cell. Cell borders are where there are doubled up load doors
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First cell done
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Second cell done, third cell size decreased to match other cells better and be more navigable
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Post by LilianaUnfolded »

Figured I should post a WIP file since I might be hyperfixated on something else for a minute or two. It's literally only the last room left to do, trust my motivation for it will just randomly appear one day and I'll bash it out in an hour
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Post by LilianaUnfolded »

Finally ready for review! This dungeon was so fun to make, I did most of the development in bursts rather than any kind of consistent schedule so that's why it took so long. There's probably a lot of things I haven't done right so feel free to set back to indev and give me a ping if there's anything needing done! I think I got the scale just right in proportion to Paruddma's Maw but let me know if you plan on cutting any rooms, and thanks for everyone's help in the process of making this!
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Post by Denis418 »

Thank you. Reviewing

I'll have to swap the corals
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Name: Voiceless Harmony, Hall of Dissonance
Clean: Yes
Esm dependencies: Ok
Northmarker: Ok
Light: Ok
Illegal to sleep here: No, correct
Pathgrid: Absent, correct
Fits exterior: Yes
Bleeders:
• Some kelp leaves
Floaters:
• ingred_diamond_01
• T_Dreu_Furn_Spike_04
• T_Imp_ColClayBowl_01
• T_Dreu_Furn_CageLarge_02

Adjusted:
• Various kelp
• 2 x T_Dreu_Furn_Tapestry_05
• T_Dreu_Furn_Ch6_CyrGem
• T_Dreu_Furn_Shelf_01
• 4 x T_Dreu_Furn_Pylon_03
• T_Dreu_Furn_Basin_02b
• T_Dreu_Furn_LampHook_01
• 2 x T_Dreu_Furn_Pylon_01
Other:
• Replaced all deprecated corals in all cells.
• Connected with the exterior

Name: Voiceless Harmony, Sonance Vestibule
Northmarker: Ok
Light: Ok
Illegal to sleep here: No, correct
Pathgrid: Absent, correct
Fits exterior: Ok

Floaters:
• T_Dreu_Furn_Ch6_ComIngd
• T_Imp_ColIron_PauldronL_01
• T_Imp_Legion_Broadsword_03 – reduced its health
• T_Imp_Silver_Wakizashi_01 - reduced its health
• T_IngMine_Garnet_01
• Smear algae
Adjusted:
• 2 x T_Dreu_Furn_Pylon_04
• 4 x T_Dreu_Furn_Pylon_02
• Kelp
• ingred_diamond_01
• T_Dreu_Furn_CageLarge_02
• T_Imp_Legion_Club_01
• T_Dreu_Furn_Ch5_CyrPos
• T_Dreu_Var_Lantern_01_128
• Gold_005
• T_Imp_Silver_Mace_02
• T_Dreu_Furn_Chair_02
• T_Dreu_Furn_CageLarge_02

Name: Voiceless Harmony, Anechoic Chamber
Northmarker: Ok
Light: Ok
Illegal to sleep here: No, correct
Pathgrid: Absent, correct
Fits exterior: Ok

Floaters:
• T_IngMine_Topaz_01
Adjusted:
• glass dagger
• 2 x T_Dreu_Furn_Pylon_01
• Kelp
• T_Dreu_Furn_Ch5_CyrLoot
• T_Dreu_Furn_CageLarge_01
• T_Dreu_Furn_CageLarge_02
• T_Dreu_Var_Lamp_02_256
• T_Dreu_Furn_Tapestry_04
• T_Imp_ColBarrowChalice_01
• T_Dreu_Furn_Ch6_ComGold
Other:
• Replaced 2 Dunmer pots with silver items.
• Replaced an empty barrel and an empty crate with expensive drinks and smugglers variants.

Merge notes: none

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Merged
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