Also this passage
obviously contradicts the current location map. We should either fix former or latter.Further east you will find facilities of recruitment in Fort Helgen at the Pale Pass[...]
Neugrad shouldn't be just a legion fort but a town aswell, as it uses a colovian town name. Should be like Pelagiad.
What are your thoughts about adding Dunstad to the southern Haafinheim? It would be good, if Falkirstad wasn't the only 'stad', we have. I don't know, if we couldn't just take one of the two villages for it.
If Northhall is to keep its current name, it should be turned into an imperial or colovian town, otherwise we should nordify it like Granite Hall.
Edit: I have mixed feelings about Blackmoor. Maybe add a branch of the Hjaalmarch between Eldersblood peak and Labyrinthian and have Blackmoor around there? It could be another imperial mining site.