Archad #1 - Mayor's House [christixn][Reviewed]

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Archad #1 - Mayor's House [christixn][Reviewed]

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Number 1 on the above map. Residence of the mayor of Archad, a low-ranking member of the County Anvil faction.

Please make this int 2 tiles wide on the ends, 3 tiles long on the short side, and 4 tiles long on the long side. The mayor is not wealthy, and his house should use only M furniture.
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Ready for review.
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Name: PC_Archad, Mayor's House
Clean: Yes, has a custom letter:
ID: PC_ArchadMayor_sc_01
Name: Letter to the Countess
<DIV ALIGN="CENTER"><FONT COLOR="000000" SIZE="3" FACE="Magic Cards"><BR>
[The following document is a status report to Countess Umbranox detailing the reconstruction efforts of Archad.]<BR>
<BR>

Lighting: Fog shouldn’t be at 0’s, increased. Culled a light_com_lamp_01 near the desk with papers, because the window and a brass candle are enough. Moved the table to fill in the emptied corner. Culled another lamp near the bed and moved a brass candlestick from the bookshelf to the night table.
Fits exterior: Yes (though, in the latest section, it is a one-story building. I assume, there exists a fresher build of Archad).
Pathgrid: Ok, adjusted one node in front of the fireplace to cover more space.
Northmarker: Ok
Illegal to sleep here: Yes, correct
Bleeders:
• Furn_Com_Kegstand into the wall.
• light_logpile into the iron bars below.
• furn_hook_01 into the garlic bundle tails, scaled it down to fix it.
• 2xlight_com_chandelier_03_01 – their connection with the ceiling is not precise. Lowered them and rotated.
• furn_com_rm_chair_03 into the tapestry.
Floaters: --------
Other:
• Replaced T_Com_IronPot_02 with T_Com_CopperKettle_01 because I think the iron set of kitchenware looks out of place in this game, and too modern for the setting.
• Culled T_Com_Breadpaddle_02a because there’s already one on the table, and the fireplace doesn’t really work for baking bread.
• Swapped the grain and T_Imp_Grinder_01 places with two clay plates above, because the lower shelf didn’t quite had space to fit the grinder. Did the same for the pitcher and 3 cups. Grouped the grain. Placed the candle on the lower shelf to prevent it from burning the upper board.
• Culled one metal pitcher from behind the plantpot on the window, because there’s already one metal pitcher in the house, and one redware pitcher near a pot.
• Culled one iron goblet from the desk window. Culled T_Com_CandleStickIron_01 from the night table. Fixed the rotation of the table to look a bit more noble.
• Added a purse with gold T_MwCom_Var_SkS1Gold to the desk, and scattered some coins near it. Added T_Com_Hourglass_01 and p_disease_resistance_c near the bed. Added misc_com_plate_03 and T_Com_PotionBottle_03 to the bookshelf. Added a pipe to the reading table. Moved the cards and dices to the bookshelf, added a T_Com_Lute_01 there. Added misc_com_plate_07 to the desk to place siyat cigars on it, because these assets are very difficult to notice. Placed a Misc_Com_Bucket_Metal near the fireplace.
• Placed another furn_com_rm_table_05 into the far corner of the study room to collect all various papers scattered around the place on it. Specifically, the newspaper, the tax notice, and the accountant scribbles.

Merge notes: The exterior needs a chimney here. And the Bellman newspaper should be replaced with the local one when available.
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