Talan's Vineyard - Storehouse [Cream Sandwich][Reviewed]

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Talan's Vineyard - Storehouse [Cream Sandwich][Reviewed]

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A storehouse tower, where unused bottles, crates of material, and vineyard tools are kept. Please use P furniture where relevant here, and make use of the height of the int with ladders.
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RFR
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This needs more work:
- The shelves have too many copy-pasted items. Break the samyness with irregular item here and there. Place more tools, like repair items and misc tools. Don't fill a shelf with a single item copied around - it only looks good in real life. Randomise the bottles rotation so they don't all face the same direction (use randomise rotation CSSE function).
- There are dedicated block and rope pieces - use them to replace the cobbled suspension mechanism.
- Rotate the grindstone 180 degrees to face the user.
- You can bring the pathgrid to the second floor.
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Completely redesigned the platform mechanism, nuked about 50% of the bottles, added crates and tools here and there, added pathgrid to the second floor (only the accessible side, so the NPCs don't fall down).
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Name: Talan's Vineyard, Storehouse
Clean: Yes
Esm dependencies: Ok
Northmarker: ok
Light: tweaked ambience.
Illegal to sleep here: Yes, correct.
Pathgrid: Adjusted a node, connected two other nodes, prolonged the path through the newly added floor piece on the second floor.
Fits exterior: Yes

Floaters:
⦁ T_Com_Var_Knife_03
⦁ T_Com_Farm_Scythe_01
⦁ T_Com_Hammer_Repair_01
⦁ T_Com_Hammer_05
Adjusted:
⦁ Ropes.
Other:
⦁ Replaced T_Com_Var_RigTackleTop with a smaller variant, T_Com_Furn_Pulley_01.
⦁ Removed extra ropes.
⦁ Added a floor tile to the eastern side of the top floor - for ease of work with the pulley.
⦁ Removed extra knives and plates.
⦁ Added shears.
⦁ Removed 3 chandaliers.
⦁ Added a lantern on a rope.
⦁ Linked with exterior.
⦁ Lifted up the lanterns in front of the manor entrance to fix greenlight.
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Merged into PC_Sutch
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