Fenbru Thane Manor (Sky_iRe_Mid31) [Batkan][Reviewed]

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Fenbru Thane Manor (Sky_iRe_Mid31) [Batkan][Reviewed]

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Claim marked 3 on the following map
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The home of Thane Solveig, a female Nord warrior and loyal vassal of King Barda. Ruler of the small hamlet of Fenbru, as well as lord of the bridge. She inherited the land after her father, who was awarded the village for his service in the War of Bend'r Mahk.

The manor, a considerable part of Midkarth land and the bridge originally belonged to Thane Julfnar - a minor Nordic noble who led a warband during the war, but whose incompetence or deceit led to a series of defeats for the Nords. He dissappeared during his final battle, which has led many to believe he switched sides and the Nords were willfully led into an ambush. He was stripped of his titles in absentia, and the land awarded to Bjorl the Bear, Solveig's father.

Her estate is somewhat wealthy, based on owning several nearby farms and by tolling merchants crossing the bridge. But having inherited her father's stout and modest lifestyle, her home does not flaunt an extravagant lifestyle.

Use T_Nor_FurnM.

Cell -102,16

The exterior can be found here (use the latest file)

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Unlocked.
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I would like to claim this please :)

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Ready for review. Windows and chimney should be moved on exterior
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Not a review, just a few comments.

Far too much ironwood in this int. The set should be regarded as Limeware was in vanilla. Meaning rare and exclusive. The few pieces on the bookshelf is fine. Also get rid of the Rga stuff, it's Redguard clutter, the Colovian clutter and the Limeware flask. Lighting is too dark as well.

Apart from these critiques, this is a really pretty and homely interior. I like the well stocked pantry and the fireplace room in particular. Well done!
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Post by Fran »

Thank you. Means alot.
I just realized prices on ironwood. Wasnt aware its this expansive and rare, i just really really like way it looks so i went little overboard with it xD.
Ye i figured about rga and colovian flasks and pot but thought that maybe she who lives there received gift from someone or something similar but also thought probably shouldnt be there, wasnt sure, but u are absolutley right. Will remove them
About lighting i had lot issues with this particular interior, specially with lightsources, dunno what problem was, will rise general lighting abit.

Thx alot for comments and critiques. I will update new version soon

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Newer version. Hopefully fixed everything mentioned above.
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Just fixed one obvious bleed
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Reviewing.

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Clean: yes
Lighting: good
Northmarker: present, incorrect (fixed)
Fits exterior: yes (move chimney)
Pathgrid: yes
Illegal to sleep here: yes, good

Floaters:

Bleeders:
- T_Com_Frypan_01
- T_Nor_SetMarkarth_I_Pillar_01

Misc:
- Replaced stories with floor on top level
- Replaced T_Nor_Potion_ with vanilla variants
- Removed pillows from beds
- Replaced T_Com_Furn_PeltBearColovian_01 with vanilla variant
- Removed low-hanging chandeliers
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Merged

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