Eloisa, Driftwatch Keep [Deenday][Reviewed]

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Eloisa, Driftwatch Keep [Deenday][Reviewed]

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Driftwatch Keep is the main forward operating base for the East Navy, and the headquarters of the Temaris Squadron. The keep should be well-maintained but a bit sparse -- the Navy's budget is stretched thin. Should include three interior cells:
  • The main keep, containing the small chapel, barracks, and mess hall
  • The Commodore's Tower, containing the residence of the Knight Commodore on site and lodgings for her high-ranking subordinates, as well as an operations room with a map table (see Firewatch's navy base)
  • The dungeons, a dank underground complex connecting the two main buildings and containing warehouse storage and prison cells for pirates, smugglers, etc
This claim should use LegionCyr int pieces and M furniture throughout, with the exception of the tower, which should use R furniture.
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Addendum: The ranking officer of Driftwatch should be a Commodore not an admiral.
The tower in the admiralty keep should be used for a singular battlemage on station here.

Claimant for the fortress may want to try to make the interior feel like a place manned at below full strength.

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Commenting to push this up past merged claims.
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Posting progress on Driftwatch (Main keep's layout and part of the top floor/chapel)
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More progress on Driftwatch (layout of the dungeon/prison and Commodore's tower)
I'll continue with this interior at a later time, since there seems to be some pieces missing for the LegionCyr set
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More progress on Driftwatch (Furnished more of the main keep's barracks and mess hall, and changed dungeon's layout a bit)
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More progress on Driftwatch (Dungeon's furnishing and cluttering is complete)
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More progress on Driftwatch (Main Keep completed)
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More progress on Driftwatch (Last WIP post, next one will prolly be the up for review int)
Drastically changed the Commodore's Keep layout to make it similar to the Navy's keep on Firewatch, and started to furnish and clutter the keep now that the last missing tower int piece has been merged to TD
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Placing up for review
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reviewing

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Name: PI_Eloisa, Driftwatch Keep: Main Keep
Clean: No, has PI main as master
Gridsnap: good
Fits exterior: No, door alignment doesnt match cleanly. Adjusted basement door and have requested exterior edits to the main keep for expedience sake
Northmarker: correct
Pathgrid: Too few nodes with overly large paths in the larger rooms.
Lighting: Adjusted settings, replaced the palmwood candles with iron
Illegal to Sleep Here: yes, correct


Bleeders:

Floaters:

Other:
heavily tweaked the shell to replace areas where quarter pillars were used to cover gaps caused by not using the correct piece in the shell
Tweaked the messhall and armor to include pillars



Name: PI_Eloisa, Driftwatch Keep: Commodore's Tower
Gridsnap: good
Fits exterior: No, dungeon entrances are on the same level as the ground floor and the main entrance isnt aligned correctly
Northmarker: correct
Pathgrid: as above
Lighting: as above
Illegal to Sleep Here: yes, correct

Bleeders:

Floaters:

Other:
heavily tweaked the shell to replace areas where quarter pillars were used to cover gaps caused by not using the correct piece in the shell
deleted one entrance to the dungeon
added weapon racks with bows
added misc clutter


Name: PI_Eloisa, Driftwatch Keep: Dungeon
Gridsnap: good
Fits exterior: No based on issues with the main keep, tweaked western side accordingly
Northmarker: correct
Pathgrid: good
Lighting: ambient and sunlight too bright.
Illegal to Sleep Here: yes, correct

Bleeders:

Floaters:

Other:
removed second entrance to commadors tower
replaced colovian bread with regular bread
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